Bilal aka Billyboy9000

                    Molly Moons Incredible Book Of Hypnotism

 Q.27   In my opinion the book ended kinda fast. It was like come back to orphanage(which is Molly's home) and give back hypnotism book to owner then done. If I was the author the ending would have drastically changed. Since this is a series book and the 1st one of them It should be a cliffhanger ending. Here is how my version would go:Petula (Molly's pet) is caught by the antagonist which is dr. Norman. Molly (protagonist) gets a plan with the cops and they catch dr. Norman. After that they track down where Petula is and then it becomes a happy scene. To make it even happier i'd have Rocky( the original reason/mission was for Molly to find Rocky) come in. They would hug, talk then get out of the place. But in the last scene it would be dr. Norman laughing as if he was a psycho and say"I will get you Molly and when I do you will see 
Hahaha".The reader would want to know more thus getting the next book.